Thursday, January 12, 2023

The Runaway Viscount by Darcy Burke


The Runaway Viscount by Darcy Burke
Rating: 3 stars out of 5

I received a copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. 

This was a zippy and sweet little romance that made me want to read more in the Matchmaking Chronicles series.

The book begins in a snowed in inn (see what I did there?) where Juliana, an intelligent and witty widow, and Lucas, who can probably best be described as a rake with a heart of gold who isn't very good at the rake part, encounter one another for the first time. Sparks fly and clothes fly off, but when the snow dissipates Lucas leaves without a word. A few years later they encounter one another at a house party and Juliana might have held just the tiniest grudge. The rest of the book is dominated by will-they-or-won't-they and misunderstandings, which are generally very well done.

I especially loved the wildly entertaining house party shenanigans. Juliana and Lucas' efforts to get one another's attention when, in fact, they already had one another's full attention were both heart-warming and hilarious. It was so obvious that they were besotted with one another that it always felt more like a when will they than a true will-they-or-won't they, but waiting for the when became so very satisfying. The Blind Man's Bluff game, in particular, was perfection.

I also appreciated the author's relatively realistic approach to sex-- clitoral stimulation is needed, when he is carrying her Lucas needs to set Juliana down to open doors and doesn't just kick them in, and the sex itself, while steamy enough, doesn't consist of feats that people who have actually had sexual partners know aren't possible for mere mortals.

However, a few things really weighed on me while I was reading and prevented a higher rating.

The first two chapters, which set the scene for everything that comes, were by far the weakest part of the book, and I actually thought about DNF toward the end of the second chapter. This would have been a mistake, but having never read Burke before I had nothing but those chapters to go on, and I wasn't impressed with them. These chapters were dialogue heavy, without describing much either about the setting or the main character's feelings. Juliana and Lucas did say in the dialogue why they were attracted to one another, but at that point in the book this was very much told and not shown-- for example, Lucas tells Juliana that he is impressed with her wit, but at that point we had not see her be the slightest bit witty. Brazen, perhaps, but not witty.

I also really couldn't buy into the book's stated main conflict. Juliana and Lucas were both very clear during their encounter at the inn that they only intended to be together sexually, and only until the weather improved enough for them to travel. Maybe it's because I'm in my 30's and don't have time for the pettier things life has to offer any more, but I struggled to understand why Juliana was so upset that a one-time sexual partner, who she herself only wanted to be a one-time sexual partner, failed to say goodbye to her and left when he explicitly said he would leave. Did she really have nothing better to stew on in the ensuing 2 years? It would have been different if she had wanted more to come of the liaison, but at that point she was quite insistent, even in her own mind, that she did not want more.

Now, there was a secondary conflict that was in fact far more compelling-- the fact that Juliana "was afraid to acknowledge her true feelings, let alone embrace them." At one point, after finally having this realization, she muses that maybe she is the "Runaway Widow" rather than Lucas actually being the Runaway Viscount, and that resonated with me and gave more dimension to why she was actually so upset that Lucas left. But there was no hint of this whatsoever in the book before her epiphany about it-- in fact mere pages before she was declaring loudly to Lucas and to anyone else who would listen that she didn't want to marry again. I wish this epiphany had somehow been hinted at instead of coming out of the blue.

Finally, there were a few plot threads that left me with very mixed feelings. Minor spoilers do follow. I appreciated that Burke chose to grapple with infertility in the book. I can only recall one other Historical Romance that I've read that approached this topic, and I liked how it was handled during the courtship here-- somehow both matter-of-factly and with the nuance and consideration it deserved, especially in that time period for the nobility. I also appreciated the existence of Lucas' illegitimate daughter. This is something that is also almost never written about in Historical Romance, and given how prevalent illegitimate children actually were during that time period, it was nice to see the topic get attention.

However, I wish the author had the courage to follow the infertility storyline through to its logical conclusion rather than reverse course to give the cliché happily ever after we all already know and love. And it was very hard for me to believe how overjoyed Juliana was at the existence of Lucas' illegitimate child. The fact that she had no mixed feelings about this bombshell after he failed to mention the child's existence for the whole of the house party, even after they were engaged, was really too much for me.  Perhaps, though, it's more a matter of the fact that I can't relate to the things Juliana is upset about versus those she isn't--most of what really gets her going in this book seems petty beyond belief to me, but she just accepts things I'd think of as potential deal breakers of epic proportions with barely a word.

I would recommend this to fans of Historical Romance with a slightly humorous bent and a super sweet Happily Ever After.

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